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 Post subject: Snork Gunk - Spelling and Grammar errors
 Post Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2018 4:23 am 
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Hey guys, just my usual correction thread. If you find any errors I missed, please post them here as well!

Sticky Snail = description says "nauts" instead of awesomenauts (change for consistency)
Participation throphy (trophy* unless it's a throw-trophy pun)
Congratulations!* you (missing explanation point, capitalization)
"...you successfully participated in the conchball cup" (if this is the name of the event, I tihnk it should say Conchball Cup, with capital letters)
Broken speed limiter = "...miles per hour at all time" (should say times*)
Season tickets '35 = "when the snail sticks,*" (missing a comma)
Shell Bombs = says "nauts" instead of awesomenauts (change for consistency)
* multiball = "Adds* Knockback"
"...are allowed to to* try" (repeat word)
Salt line bag = "although salt is forbidden, it has been a tradition to use salt* (a tradition to use it* use a pronoun instead)
Spiky shellball = Confusing sentence. Reword into "Increases explosion damage of shell bombs by 11%" instead
Scargi MP seal = Reword into "Each conch dunk hit against an enemy" instead.
Brainslug helm = This helm is super safe, trust me!_Try it... (missing space between "me!" and "Try")
"Try it out for a day,* you'll be a satisfied customer!" (missing a comma)
Action Gloves = Reword into "Increases the base damage of the next conch dunk by..."

I think that's all of them.

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 Post subject: Re: Snork Gunk - Spelling and Grammar errors
 Post Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2018 7:31 am 
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Agree with all of them, apart from:

    "Try it out for a day, you'll be a satisfied customer."

That's a comma splice. I'd use a colon:

    "Try it out for a day: you'll be a satisfied customer."

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 Post subject: Re: Snork Gunk - Spelling and Grammar errors
 Post Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2018 9:11 pm 
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rpvarela wrote:
"...you successfully participated in the conchball cup" (if this is the name of the event, I tihnk it should say Conchball Cup, with capital letters)
Broken speed limiter = "...miles per hour at all time" (should say times*)


"if this is the name of the event, I think it should say Conchball Cup"

Sorry, I couldn't resist. It's a speling post anyway :raehands:

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